GCSE English, Year 10
- essays far better organised
- quotations still too long
- loved Macbeth
- timed paragraph down to 12 minutes
Progress
Amara's essays are far better organised than at the start of term. Each paragraph now makes one point and backs it up, and she can write a timed analytical paragraph in twelve minutes, down from twenty. She has clearly enjoyed Macbeth and is quick to spot language worth writing about.
Next steps
To keep her quotations short and build them into her own sentences, so that her analysis has room.
For home
Reading a short newspaper article aloud each week and choosing one phrase to comment on would help.